The script described the Victory inc building as resembling a bayonet. I found some gun references and began to look for a shape that felt right

I added horizontal struts to create an overbearing impression.

My first thumbnails to break down the script and find the best way to tell the story.

Panel 6 proved a harder nut to crack. I finally felt that the small sketch top left did the trick.

Pencil detail 1.

Panel 6 finished pencil.

Ink detail 1.

Ink detail 2.

Full page artwork.